Hi everybody, I'm generating candidate versions for the * pages I found here
http://www.mail-archive.com/[email protected]/msg06037.html that were under "review" status. net-manual.page was one of them. Here's the patch. -- Aline Bessa GNU/Linux Registered User #452373
From b1a3978eb4cd37a61c3953b213d36148adeb824a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: alibezz <[email protected]> Date: Mon, 4 Apr 2011 19:12:30 -0300 Subject: [PATCH] Generating candidate version for net-manual.page --- gnome-help/C/net-manual.page | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page index 9d28b05..cb58d07 100644 --- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page +++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ id="net-manual"> <info> <link type="guide" xref="net"/> - <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="review"/> + <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="candidate"/> <credit type="author"> <name>Phil Bull</name> @@ -21,32 +21,32 @@ <steps> <item> - <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and click <gui>Edit Connections</gui>.</p> + <p>Click on the network icon on the top bar and click on <gui>Edit Connections</gui>.</p> </item> <item> - <p>Find the network connection that you want to set-up manually. For example, if you plug-in to the network with a cable, look at the <gui>Wired</gui> tab.</p> + <p>Find the network connection that you want to setup manually. For example, if you plugin to the network with a cable, look at the <gui>Wired</gui> tab.</p> </item> <item> - <p>Click the connection you want to edit to select it, then click <gui>Edit</gui>.</p> + <p>Click on the connection you want to edit and then click on the <gui>Edit</gui> option.</p> </item> <item> - <p>Go to the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> tab and change the <gui>Method</gui> to <gui>Manual</gui>.</p> + <p>Go to the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> tab and change the <gui>Method</gui> option to <gui>Manual</gui>.</p> </item> <item> - <p>Click <gui>Add</gui> and type the <em>IP address</em>, <em>network mask</em> and <em>default gateway IP address</em> into the columns in the <gui>Addresses</gui> list. Press <key>Enter</key> when you've finished typing each address.</p> - <p>All three of these addresses must be "IP addresses", which will be four numbers separated by periods (e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p> + <p>Click on the <gui>Add</gui> option and type the <em>IP address</em>, <em>network mask</em> and <em>default gateway IP address</em> into the corresponding columns of the <gui>Addresses</gui> list. Press <key>Enter</key> or <key>Tab</key> after typing each address.</p> + <p>These three addresses must be IP addresses, i.e. they must be four numbers separated by periods (e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p> </item> <item> - <p>Type the IP addresses of the DNS servers you want to use, separated by commas.</p> + <p>Type the IP addresses of the DNS servers you want to use in the corresponding field, separated by commas.</p> </item> <item> - <p>Click <gui>Save</gui>. If you are not connected to the network, go to the network icon on the top bar and connect to it. Test the network settings by trying to visit a website or look at shared files on the network, for example.</p> + <p>Click on <gui>Save</gui>. If you are not connected to the network, go to the network icon on the top bar and connect to it. Test the network settings by trying to visit a website or look at shared files on the network, for example.</p> </item> </steps> -- 1.6.0.4
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