Hi Aline, On Mon, 2011-04-04 at 19:15 -0300, Aline Bessa wrote: > I'm generating candidate versions for the * pages I found here > http://www.mail-archive.com/[email protected]/msg06037.html > that were under "review" status. > net-manual.page was one of them.
I've reviewed and applied the patches you sent. Great work! You've picked up lots of typos and fixed a number of ambiguously-worded sentences. Some very good catches in there. One comment on some of the changes - the recommended style for instructing a user to click a button is this: "Click <gui>OK</gui>." Not this: "Click on <gui>OK</gui>." This was a decision we made a year or two ago - there's no need for the extra word in there. I've reverted these changes in your patches. This reminds me that we should finish the style guide at some point too... (By the way, I decided not to apply the patch for net-othersconnect because the only changes to the text were to change "click" to "click on".) Thanks, and well done! Phil _______________________________________________ gnome-doc-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-doc-list
