On Mon, 2010-01-25 at 13:38 -0800, Christian Sasso wrote: > On Sun, Jan 24, 2010 at 11:38 AM, Andre Klapper <[email protected]> wrote: > Am Mittwoch, den 13.01.2010, 13:36 -0800 schrieb Christian > Sasso: > > > From > > > > <http://library.gnome.org/devel/platform-overview/stable/who-should-read.html.en> > > - "It will provide an overview how you can use" -> "It will > provide an > > overview OF how you can use" > > > I don't know. Are you a native english speaker? > > My gut feeling is that "of" is really required in this context, but my > guts are Italian.
It's incorrect at the moment without the "of". It's awkward even with the "of". You might change it to: "It will provide an overview of the GNOME platform, showing how you can use it to build useful software. However, I think that paragraph is superfluous anyway. I'd remove it. -- [email protected] www.murrayc.com www.openismus.com _______________________________________________ gnome-love mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-love
