On Sun, 27 Mar 2005 17:48:33 -0800, Tom Lord wrote: > > I've been working up some new docs in "handbook" format. > It's not done yet but there's enough to get the sense: > > http://www.seyza.com/src/docs-tla/my/id.html > > and > > http://www.gnuarch.org/src/docs-tla/my/id.html > > I'm open to "early feedback" at this stage although > the development pace for these docs is very fast > so it won't be "early" for long :-)
Some comments: 'Next' and 'Prev' would be nice within each section 1.1: 'revctl' - I wouldn't be shortening words straight off the bat - I'd suggest ~/arch/archives as the 'archloc' - likewise, ~/arch/mirrors as the 'mirrorloc' - and, ~/arch/revision-library as the 'revlib' 2.4: intro paragraph is hard to parse 4.1: the wiki syntax has broken the display 4.2: why not discuss 'tla grab' ? 5.1: mention '-l' ? since making your archive available for others is a common next step, typically done via plain HTTP 5.3+ and onwards aren't displayed in the left nav-area for some reason Cheers, Anand _______________________________________________ Gnu-arch-users mailing list [email protected] http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/gnu-arch-users GNU arch home page: http://savannah.gnu.org/projects/gnu-arch/
