Anand Kumria wrote:
On Sun, 27 Mar 2005 17:48:33 -0800, Tom Lord wrote:


I've been working up some new docs in "handbook" format.
It's not done yet but there's enough to get the sense:

 http://www.seyza.com/src/docs-tla/my/id.html

and

 http://www.gnuarch.org/src/docs-tla/my/id.html

I'm open to "early feedback" at this stage although
the development pace for these docs is very fast
so it won't be "early" for long :-)


Some comments:

'Next' and 'Prev' would be nice within each section

1.1: 'revctl' - I wouldn't be shortening words straight off the bat

- I'd suggest ~/arch/archives as the 'archloc'

- likewise, ~/arch/mirrors as the 'mirrorloc'

- and, ~/arch/revision-library as the 'revlib'

2.4: intro paragraph is hard to parse

4.1: the wiki syntax has broken the display

4.2: why not discuss 'tla grab' ?

5.1: mention '-l' ? since making your archive available for others is a
common next step, typically done via plain HTTP

5.3+ and onwards aren't displayed in the left nav-area for some reason

I think this is because they don't exist yet. Try clicking on a link and you'll find you get 404.


Cheers, Anand

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