"Chris Sawer" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes:
> Copyright (c) 2000 By <name>
> All rights reserved.
>
> Permission is hereby granted, without written agreement and without
> license or royalty fees, to use, copy, modify, distribute, perform and
> record this music and to distribute, perform and record modified
> versions of this music for any purpose, provided that the above
> copyright notice, this paragraph and the following disclaimer appear
> with all copies of this music, whatever the format of the copy,
> printed, audio or otherwise.
>
> THIS MUSIC IS PROVIDED "AS IS", WITHOUT WARRANTY OF ANY KIND, EXPRESS
> OR IMPLIED, INCLUDING BUT NOT LIMITED TO THE WARRANTIES OF
> MERCHANTABILITY, FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE AND NONINFRINGEMENT.
>
>
> Does anyone have any more suggestions for improving this?
Yes, remove the `All rights reserved' because it's contradictory.
> It obviously won't fit in the tagline of the music so a sentence such
> as the following will need to be used in the tagline:
>
> This music is released under the MutopiaBSD license [better name
> needed!]. You should have received a copy with this music. If not, it
> is available for download at http://sca.uwaterloo.ca/Mutopia/.
Putting a Web site address there may not be a good idea, because you
can't guarantee that the site will always be there.
--
Mark Seaborn
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