Thanks Nick, I have incorporated all that feedback. I re-read it and
fixed a few other instances of poor capitalisation. If there are any
other nits, please let me know.
The only other issue I can see is an erroneous index which gets created
by the XML conversion tool. If anyone has any thoughts on how to change
or remove it, I'd appreciate the advice.
Tony K
On 23/04/12 8:05 AM, Nick Hilliard wrote:
On 19/04/2012 06:16, Anthony Kirkham wrote:
All,
I'm very keen to know if we can progress this draft to WGLC? Comments please?
I like the draft and would like to see it moved to WGLC. No major
comments, but a couple of nits:
- weil-shared-transition-space-request is now rfc6598
- the last paragraph in section 5 is sloppily worded.
- section 11, reword "to using private addressing, Such" to be "to using
private addressing; such"
- there are a couple of other incorrect capitalisations and instances of
incorrectly used punctuation marks.
Nick
Tony K
On 10/04/12 4:49 PM, [email protected] wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories. This draft is a work item of the Global Routing Operations
Working Group of the IETF.
Title : Issues with Private IP Addressing in the Internet
Author(s) : Anthony Kirkham
Filename : draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt
Pages : 15
Date : 2012-04-09
The purpose of this document is to provide a discussion of the
potential problems of using private, RFC1918, or non-globally-
routable addressing within the core of an SP network. The discussion
focuses on link addresses and to a small extent loopback addresses.
While many of the issues are well recognised within the ISP
community, there appears to be no document that collectively
describes the issues.
A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt
Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
This Internet-Draft can be retrieved at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt
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