---- Original Message ----- From: "Anthony Kirkham" <[email protected]> To: "Nick Hilliard" <[email protected]> Cc: <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, April 25, 2012 3:38 AM
> Thanks Nick, I have incorporated all that feedback. I re-read it and > fixed a few other instances of poor capitalisation. If there are any > other nits, please let me know. > > The only other issue I can see is an erroneous index which gets created > by the XML conversion tool. If anyone has any thoughts on how to change > or remove it, I'd appreciate the advice. Tony The index is generated because you have an <iref ... /> XML element in your source. Perhaps <xref... or <eref... was meant (see http://xml.resource.org/authoring/draft-mrose-writing-rfcs.html for more information). That is the easy part. Getting the I-D to progress, now that is a real challenge, as the recent posts of Ron Bonica to the GROW list may suggest. The next step, assuming you see no scope for improvement (and I would leave the <iref... for the time being), is to ask the Chairs to initiate a Last Call. There is an e-mail address for the chairs of a WG, which persists as and when the individuals appointed to the office change, and I have added that to this reply. Tom Petch > > Tony K > > > > On 23/04/12 8:05 AM, Nick Hilliard wrote: > > On 19/04/2012 06:16, Anthony Kirkham wrote: > >> All, > >> > >> I'm very keen to know if we can progress this draft to WGLC? Comments please? > > I like the draft and would like to see it moved to WGLC. No major > > comments, but a couple of nits: > > > > - weil-shared-transition-space-request is now rfc6598 > > - the last paragraph in section 5 is sloppily worded. > > - section 11, reword "to using private addressing, Such" to be "to using > > private addressing; such" > > - there are a couple of other incorrect capitalisations and instances of > > incorrectly used punctuation marks. > > > > Nick > > > >> Tony K > >> > >> > >> On 10/04/12 4:49 PM, [email protected] wrote: > >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > >>> directories. This draft is a work item of the Global Routing Operations > >>> Working Group of the IETF. > >>> > >>> Title : Issues with Private IP Addressing in the Internet > >>> Author(s) : Anthony Kirkham > >>> Filename : draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt > >>> Pages : 15 > >>> Date : 2012-04-09 > >>> > >>> The purpose of this document is to provide a discussion of the > >>> potential problems of using private, RFC1918, or non-globally- > >>> routable addressing within the core of an SP network. The discussion > >>> focuses on link addresses and to a small extent loopback addresses. > >>> While many of the issues are well recognised within the ISP > >>> community, there appears to be no document that collectively > >>> describes the issues. > >>> > >>> > >>> A URL for this Internet-Draft is: > >>> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-grow-private-ip-sp-cores-01.txt > >>> > >>> _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow
