Only other style change I might make was in section 6. The last sentence is a bit dense. You might break it into two like:
> Route Mirroring is unlikely to be suitable for implementation in conventional > routers, and its use is NOT RECOMMENDED except in cases where implementors > have > carefully considered the tradeoffs. These tradeoffs include: router resource > exhaustion, the potential to flow-block BGP peers, and the slowing of routing > convergence. John Kemp On 7/4/15 8:33 AM, John Scudder wrote: > Hi Everyone, > > Version -09 contains some minor editorial and stylistic changes and one > substantive change (or rather, set of substantive changes) which is that > for every IANA registry I created a small range near the end as > "Experimental" and reserved the last value. Seemed like good practice. > > I hope this is the final version and would like to request a working > group last call. > > Thanks, > > --John > > Begin forwarded message: > >> *From:* <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> >> *Date:* July 4, 2015 at 11:03:45 AM EDT >> *To:* Stephen Stuart <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, >> John Scudder <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, "Rex >> Fernando" <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, Stephen Stuart >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, Rex Fernando >> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, John Scudder <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> >> *Subject:* *New Version Notification for draft-ietf-grow-bmp-09.txt* >> >> >> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-grow-bmp-09.txt >> has been successfully submitted by John Scudder and posted to the >> IETF repository. >> >> Name: draft-ietf-grow-bmp >> Revision: 09 >> Title: BGP Monitoring Protocol >> Document date: 2015-07-04 >> Group: grow >> Pages: 25 >> URL: >> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-09.txt >> Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-grow-bmp/ >> Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-09 >> Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-grow-bmp-09 >> >> Abstract: >> This document defines a protocol, BMP, that can be used to monitor >> BGP sessions. BMP is intended to provide a more convenient interface >> for obtaining route views for research purpose than the screen- >> scraping approach in common use today. The design goals are to keep >> BMP simple, useful, easily implemented, and minimally service- >> affecting. BMP is not suitable for use as a routing protocol. >> >> >> >> >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of >> submission >> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org >> <http://tools.ietf.org>. >> >> The IETF Secretariat >> > > > _______________________________________________ > GROW mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow > _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow
