On Jul 7, 2015, at 10:20 PM, John G. Scudder <[email protected]> wrote: > On Jul 7, 2015, at 3:48 PM, John Kemp <[email protected]> > wrote: >> >> Only other style change I might make was in section 6. >> The last sentence is a bit dense. You might break it into >> two like: >> >>> Route Mirroring is unlikely to be suitable for implementation in >>> conventional >>> routers, and its use is NOT RECOMMENDED except in cases where implementors >>> have >>> carefully considered the tradeoffs. These tradeoffs include: router >>> resource >>> exhaustion, the potential to flow-block BGP peers, and the slowing of >>> routing >>> convergence. > > That's better, thanks. I've adopted your suggestion in the source sitting on > my disk and will publish it as -10 (along with any other suggestions received > in the interim) when I-D submissions reopen.
Done. --John _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow
