On Mon, May 22, 2017 at 04:29:06PM -0400, Dale R. Worley wrote:
>I suspect my problems come from not realizing there has been a change of
>focus.  (It may be much clearer to routing people.)  So I would suggest
>expanding the title of Appendix A to "Transition Considerations for
>Vendors of BGP Implementations".

Hi Dale, how about simply "Transition Considerations for BGP Implementers" as
there are many excellent FOSS implementations in addition to implementations
sold by vendors?

>    For an implementer, transitioning to a compliant BGP implementation
>    may require a software development and release process that can take
>    several years.
>
>Perhaps "a software development and release" can be omitted.

Updated: For an implementer, transitioning to a compliant BGP implementation
may require a process that can take several years.

>> This document updates [RFC4271] so that routes are neither imported nor
>> exported unless specifically enabled by configuration.  The solution
>> reduces the consequences of these problems, and improves the default level
>> of Internet routing security.
>
>In that case, I'd start the second sentence with "This change ..." or
>perhaps "This update ..." -- nothing has previously been labeled a
>"solution", so the reader has to search a bit to determine the
>antecedent.

Updated: This change reduces the consequences of these problems, and improves
the default level of Internet routing security.

We'll wait to send a new diff in case there are further comments.

Kind regards,
Greg

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Greg Hankins <[email protected]>
Senior Product Manager
IP/Optical Networks, Nokia

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