On Fri, May 3, 2019 at 11:52 PM Brian Carpenter via Datatracker < [email protected]> wrote:
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review result: Ready with Issues > > Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2019-05-04 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-05-13 > IESG Telechat date: > > Summary: Ready, but... > -------- > > Minor issues: > ------------- > > This seems *much* more like a BCP than a standard. > In my opinion, this document adds new requirements or at least new considerations for implementations of RFC1997, I think that means it updates RFC1997. I liked to see it have "Updates: 1997" metadata added and appropriate statements in the Abstract and Intro. I think this requires and justifies it being Standards Track. In both the Abstract and the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction, > it might be helpful to add something like: > This document recommends specific action items to limit future > inconsistency. > -- =============================================== David Farmer Email:[email protected] Networking & Telecommunication Services Office of Information Technology University of Minnesota 2218 University Ave SE Phone: 612-626-0815 Minneapolis, MN 55414-3029 Cell: 612-812-9952 ===============================================
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