> Okay, this is it. Unless something looks really off, the let > me know. Otherwise, let's get this baby out.
It's quite professional now, but I think it needs these small changes to really make the grade: - Opening keynote will be presented by Jeff Waugh + The opening keynote will be presented by Jeff Waugh - Other speakers include Jim Gettys, Vice President of Engineering of the One Laptop Per Child who will be presenting OLPC, a community effort to give children a chance to learn using specially designed laptops, titled "Challenges and Opportunities of the $100 laptop" (can we rewrite this para). + Other speakers include Jim Gettys, Vice President of Engineering of the One Laptop Per Child project (OLPC), whose "Challenges and Opportunities of the $100 laptop" presentation will describe this community effort to support childrens' education by providing specially designed laptops. - Simon Philipps + Simon Phipps (We must get this right) - Sebastian Bacher and Daniel Holbach at Canonical, will talk + Sebastian Bacher and Daniel Holbach at Canonical will talk - More than 30 GNOME related software projects will be represented ranging + More than 30 GNOME related software projects will be represented, ranging - F-Spot for photo managing software, Gossip for instant messaging client, Beagle for desktop search, and Ekiga a videoconferencing and VOIP software. + F-Spot for photo managing, Gossip for instant messaging, Beagle for desktop search, and Ekiga a videoconferencing and VOIP client. - The first GUADEC which was started in Paris in June 2000 is the gathering of GNOME developers from around the world. + GUADEC, which first took place in Paris in June 2000, is a gathering of GNOME developers from around the world. - GNOME development is sponsored by many companies. Some of them are: + GNOME development is sponsored by many companies. These include: - Sun Microsystems (sun.com/software/opensource/), a significant participant and contributor to industry-changing open source projects including; + Sun Microsystems (sun.com/software/opensource/), a significant participant and contributor to industry-changing open source projects; Doing this on the wiki in future might make this easier. Many thanks, Sri. Murray Cumming [EMAIL PROTECTED] www.murrayc.com www.openismus.com _______________________________________________ guadec-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/guadec-list
