Thanks for your edits, I will correct adn send out later. Much appreciate the feedback! :)
sri On Tue, Jun 20, 2006 at 09:18:29AM +0200, Murray Cumming wrote: > > Okay, this is it. Unless something looks really off, the let > > me know. Otherwise, let's get this baby out. > > It's quite professional now, but I think it needs these small changes to > really make the grade: > > - Opening keynote will be presented by Jeff Waugh > + The opening keynote will be presented by Jeff Waugh > > - Other speakers include Jim Gettys, Vice President of Engineering of the > One Laptop Per Child who will be presenting OLPC, a community effort to > give children a chance to learn using specially designed laptops, titled > "Challenges and Opportunities of the $100 laptop" (can we rewrite this > para). > + Other speakers include Jim Gettys, Vice President of Engineering of the > One Laptop Per Child project (OLPC), whose "Challenges and Opportunities > of the $100 laptop" presentation will describe this community effort to > support childrens' education by providing specially designed laptops. > > - Simon Philipps > + Simon Phipps > (We must get this right) > > - Sebastian Bacher and Daniel Holbach at Canonical, will talk > + Sebastian Bacher and Daniel Holbach at Canonical will talk > > - More than 30 GNOME related software projects will be represented ranging > + More than 30 GNOME related software projects will be represented, ranging > > - F-Spot for photo managing software, Gossip for instant messaging client, > Beagle for desktop search, and Ekiga a videoconferencing and VOIP > software. > + F-Spot for photo managing, Gossip for instant messaging, Beagle for > desktop search, and Ekiga a videoconferencing and VOIP client. > > - The first GUADEC which was started in Paris in June 2000 is the > gathering of GNOME developers from around the world. > + GUADEC, which first took place in Paris in June 2000, is a gathering of > GNOME developers from around the world. > > - GNOME development is sponsored by many companies. Some of them are: > + GNOME development is sponsored by many companies. These include: > > - Sun Microsystems (sun.com/software/opensource/), a significant > participant and contributor to industry-changing open source projects > including; > + Sun Microsystems (sun.com/software/opensource/), a significant > participant and contributor to industry-changing open source projects; > > Doing this on the wiki in future might make this easier. Many thanks, Sri. > > Murray Cumming > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > www.murrayc.com > www.openismus.com -- _______________________________________________ guadec-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/guadec-list
