Sounds good to me, with the first paragraph maybe a bit heavy on buzzwords.
Am Mittwoch, 17. Juli 2013 schrieb Ludovic Courtès: > This talk will reflect on a year of development, showing how far we’ve > got toward this mission, "come" instead of "got", I think; I would also continue with infinitives: "show" instead of "showing". > and showing off with a demo. "give" instead of "show off with", or "finish with"? Andreas
