Andreas Enge <[email protected]> skribis: > Sounds good to me, with the first paragraph maybe a bit heavy on buzzwords.
Heh. :-) I wanted it to be high-level and concise, and ended up reusing that ELS intro. I think I’ll go with this one, because holiday time has come. ;-) > Am Mittwoch, 17. Juli 2013 schrieb Ludovic Courtès: >> This talk will reflect on a year of development, showing how far we’ve >> got toward this mission, > > "come" instead of "got", I think; I would also continue with infinitives: > "show" instead of "showing". Agreed. >> and showing off with a demo. > > "give" instead of "show off with", or "finish with"? I really meant that we’ll be showing off. :-) Thanks for your input, Ludo’.
