On Wed, 3 May 2000, S.D.Mechveliani wrote:

> 
> >     But this is not good enough to attract general attention
> >     and to make it easy to discuss about. The onus is still
> >     on you, to be frank. 
> 
> It is large enough. If I expand it with more comments, people will
> be frightened by its messiness and would speak more about its 
> complexity. Probably, it is better to add the comments in the form
> of responses. But, for example, you wrote more than page of 
> comments, and there is nothing to really respond. The impression is
> still that the proposal had not been read.

        Responding to your challenge I am sending to you
        a very long private note with suggestions how to
        restructure your current proposal.

        Jan




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