Dear Xia,

I'm currently reading the new version of
draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06. In page 12, the figure 1 does
not match with description. I think Network Security Sub-Model and Content
Security Sub-Model have to change their position in figure 1. The problem
state is attached below.

Figure 1:

[image: pasted1]

Description in document:
As illustrated in Figure 1, *the network security function* is the key. It
usually runs as the first step to handle traffic (e.g., packet/flow
detection and filtering, etc.) over the network layer.
 The framework portion of the information model ensures that each of the
three domain sub-models (content security, network security, and attack
mitigation) can function in collaboration or independently.

*The content security* and attack mitigation sub-models can be enforced on
demand (i.e., once or recursively based on the results of network security
function).



2016년 7월 1일 (금) 오후 5:48, Xialiang (Frank) <[email protected]>님이 작성:

> Hi all,
> The new version of this draft is just submitted, which includes the
> following updates:
> * Redesign the I2NSF specified ECA model:
>         - Introduce the general external Info Model for ECA, Security
> Policy Metadata;
>         - Specify the I2NSF capability Info Model by inheriting and
> extending the general external IM;
>         - Specify the aggregation and association relation among the I2NSF
> sub-models.
> * Propose a more detailed design about “Event”, “Condition”, “Action”
> sub-classes for Network Security sub-model;
> * Make a lot of editorial text changes;
> * Have More co-authors joining.
>
> Your comments are warmly welcome!
>
> B.R.
> Frank
>
> -----邮件原件-----
> 发件人: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]]
> 发送时间: 2016年7月1日 16:24
> 收件人: [email protected]; DaCheng Zhang; Nicolas Bouthors; Xialiang
> (Frank); Luyuan Fang; Nicolas BOUTHORS; Dacheng Zhang; Edward Lopez; John
> Strassner; Kepeng Li
> 主题: New Version Notification for
> draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06.txt
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Liang Xia and posted to the IETF
> repository.
>
> Name:           draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im
> Revision:       06
> Title:          Information Model of Interface to Network Security
> Functions Capability Interface
> Document date:  2016-06-29
> Group:          Individual Submission
> Pages:          55
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06.txt
> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im/
> Htmlized:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06
> Diff:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06
>
> Abstract:
>    This draft is focused on the capability interface of NSFs (Network
>    Security Functions) and proposes its information model for managing
>    the various network security functions.
>
>
>
>
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