Good catch, YunSuk. Will correct it in next version. Thanks! 发件人: IMTL YunSuk Yeo [mailto:[email protected]] 发送时间: 2016年7月8日 16:31 收件人: Xialiang (Frank); [email protected] 主题: Re: [I2nsf] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06.txt
Dear Xia, I'm currently reading the new version of draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06. In page 12, the figure 1 does not match with description. I think Network Security Sub-Model and Content Security Sub-Model have to change their position in figure 1. The problem state is attached below. Figure 1: [pasted1] Description in document: As illustrated in Figure 1, the network security function is the key. It usually runs as the first step to handle traffic (e.g., packet/flow detection and filtering, etc.) over the network layer. The framework portion of the information model ensures that each of the three domain sub-models (content security, network security, and attack mitigation) can function in collaboration or independently. The content security and attack mitigation sub-models can be enforced on demand (i.e., once or recursively based on the results of network security function). 2016년 7월 1일 (금) 오후 5:48, Xialiang (Frank) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>님이 작성: Hi all, The new version of this draft is just submitted, which includes the following updates: * Redesign the I2NSF specified ECA model: - Introduce the general external Info Model for ECA, Security Policy Metadata; - Specify the I2NSF capability Info Model by inheriting and extending the general external IM; - Specify the aggregation and association relation among the I2NSF sub-models. * Propose a more detailed design about “Event”, “Condition”, “Action” sub-classes for Network Security sub-model; * Make a lot of editorial text changes; * Have More co-authors joining. Your comments are warmly welcome! B.R. Frank -----邮件原件----- 发件人: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> [mailto:[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>] 发送时间: 2016年7月1日 16:24 收件人: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>; DaCheng Zhang; Nicolas Bouthors; Xialiang (Frank); Luyuan Fang; Nicolas BOUTHORS; Dacheng Zhang; Edward Lopez; John Strassner; Kepeng Li 主题: New Version Notification for draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06.txt A new version of I-D, draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06.txt has been successfully submitted by Liang Xia and posted to the IETF repository. Name: draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im Revision: 06 Title: Information Model of Interface to Network Security Functions Capability Interface Document date: 2016-06-29 Group: Individual Submission Pages: 55 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06 Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-xia-i2nsf-capability-interface-im-06 Abstract: This draft is focused on the capability interface of NSFs (Network Security Functions) and proposes its information model for managing the various network security functions. Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org>. The IETF Secretariat _______________________________________________ I2nsf mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf
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