Hi Adrian, all,
Yes, but I have some minor concerns. Please find below some comments about this
draft:
* Please consider removing the use of the normative language in this text:
Assertion: Defined by the ITU in [X.1252] as "a statement made by
an entity without accompanying evidence of its validity". In the
context of I2NSF, an assertion MAY include metadata about all or
^^^^
part of the assertion (e.g., context of the assertion, or about
timestamp indicating the point in time the assertion was
created). The validity of an assertion cannot be verified.
(from [I-D.ietf-sacm-terminology]).
* Make the following change
OLD:
Capability: A set of features that are available from an I2NSF
Component. These functions may, but do not have to, be used. All
NEW:
Capability: A set of features that are available from an I2NSF
Component. These features may, but do not have to, be used. All
* I don't understand this text:
"Examples are Capabilities that are available from an
NSF Server."
Especially, what is an NSF Server?
* Consider removing these entries
Client: See I2NSF Consumer.
Client-Facing Interface: See I2NSF Consumer-Facing Interface.
I would avoid defining redundant entries.
* I don't understand this one:
Component: An encapsulation of software that communicates using
Interfaces. A Component may be implemented by hardware and/or
software, and be represented using a set of classes. In general,
a Component encapsulates a set of data structures and a set of
algorithms that implement the function(s) that it provides.
* What is an "Entity"? This term is called out in many entries. It would be OK
if "entity" was used, but I guess the use of "Entity" is on purpose.
* Not sure to understand why 'building block' is mentioned here. Saying that it
is about how data is structured/organized would be simple, IMO.
Data Structure: A low-level building block that is used in
programming to implement an algorithm. A data model typically
contains multiple types of data structures; however, a data
structure does not contain a data model. Note the difference
between a data **model** and a data **structure**.
* Please double check the wording of this sentence:
I2NSF Components are managed and communicate with other
I2NSF Components using I2NSF Interfaces.
Cheers,
Med
> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : I2nsf [mailto:[email protected]] De la part de Adrian Farrel
> Envoyé : jeudi 18 mai 2017 19:33
> À : [email protected]
> Objet : [I2nsf] Stability call for draft-ietf-i2nsf-terminology-03
>
> Hi WG,
>
> The framework document got updated to match the terminology document which
> was a
> good first test.
>
> Now we would like to make sure that the terminology as currently
> documented is
> something we can all work with. Hence this call for review and opinion.
>
> Please respond to the question "Is the terminology draft stable?"
>
> 1. No. Major changes are needed.
> If you do this you are duty bound to point out the problems, and you are
> expected to help solve them.
>
> 2. Yes, but I haven't really read it.
> If you do this we will chuckle and probably make you stand up at the next
> WG
> meeting.
>
> 3. Yes, but I have some minor concerns.
> You'll need to point them out and help fix them, but we will still be able
> to
> consider the document as a good basis for future work.
>
> 4. Yes, I think this is something we can use as our foundation.
>
> Note that Linda and I don't intend last-calling this document for a bit as
> we
> suspect new terms will show up as other work progresses.
>
> Cheers,
> Adrian
>
>
>
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