Hello Paul! Thanks for these document updates.
The brief answer to “can this draft proceed” is yes, but it first needs to go through WGLC, AD Review, IETC LC and return to the telechat for IESG review. The longer explanation is that this document was initially on the Sept-24-2020 telechat, but early IESG reviews suggested significant enough issues that it was deferred initially to the Oct-8-2020 telechat. After discussion on the I2NSF list about how to handle this feedback, the scope was determined to be significant enough that it needed be returned to back to the WG for revisions. The full history is at https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model/history/. The highlights are as follows: 2020-09-16 12 Cindy Morgan Placed on agenda for telechat - 2020-09-24 <various DISCUSS positions noted> 2020-09-24 12 Cindy Morgan Telechat date has been changed to 2020-10-08 from 2020-09-24 2020-09-28 12 Roman Danyliw IESG state changed to I-D Exists from IESG Evaluation – Defer (this moved the document back to the WG) 2020-09-28 12 Roman Danyliw Based on preliminary feedback from the IESG in preparation for the September 24, 2020 telechat, this document was initially deferred (from this telechat). After further discussion between the AD+I2NSF chairs, this document is being sent back to the WG to determine how to best resolve the dependency on the capabilities information model (i.e., draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability). (summary feedback in the datatracker) (discussed/announced on I2NSF list: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/i2nsf/4D8JZgqgMNQkWGdUfsSTy7tnUik/) From a document progression perspective, all of the reviews that occur from WGLC on must be repeated. Regards, Roman From: iesg <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong Sent: Monday, March 8, 2021 10:03 AM To: The IESG <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; skku-iotlab-members <[email protected]>; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <[email protected]>; Susan Hares <[email protected]> Subject: Re: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16.txt Hi IESG, I have addressed all the comments from the IESG for the I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model Draft: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 I attach the revision letters that were sent to the commenters. Could you move this draft forward? Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Mon, Mar 8, 2021 at 11:12 PM <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions WG of the IETF. Title : I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model Authors : Susan Hares Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong Jinyong (Tim) Kim Robert Moskowitz Qiushi Lin Filename : draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16.txt Pages : 78 Date : 2021-03-08 Abstract: This document defines an information model and the corresponding YANG data model for the capabilities of various Network Security Functions (NSFs) in the Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) framework to centrally manage the capabilities of the various NSFs. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org>. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ I2nsf mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf
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