Hi Roman, Linda, and Yoav, As you may observe, the authors have addressed all the comments from the IESG through the merging with the NSFs Capabilities Information Model Draft.
I think that Linda and Yoav can do WGLC on the latest version and submit it to Roman for AD review. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Tue, Mar 9, 2021 at 10:18 AM Roman Danyliw <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello Paul! > > > > Thanks for these document updates. > > > > The brief answer to “can this draft proceed” is yes, but it first needs to > go through WGLC, AD Review, IETC LC and return to the telechat for IESG > review. > > > > The longer explanation is that this document was initially on the > Sept-24-2020 telechat, but early IESG reviews suggested significant enough > issues that it was deferred initially to the Oct-8-2020 telechat. After > discussion on the I2NSF list about how to handle this feedback, the scope > was determined to be significant enough that it needed be returned to back > to the WG for revisions. The full history is at > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model/history/. > The highlights are as follows: > > > > 2020-09-16 12 Cindy Morgan Placed on agenda for telechat > - 2020-09-24 > > > > <various DISCUSS positions noted> > > > > 2020-09-24 12 Cindy Morgan Telechat date has been > changed to 2020-10-08 from 2020-09-24 > > > > 2020-09-28 12 Roman Danyliw IESG state > changed to I-D Exists from IESG Evaluation – Defer > > > > (this moved the document back to the WG) > > > > 2020-09-28 12 Roman Danyliw > > Based on preliminary feedback from the IESG in preparation for the > September 24, 2020 telechat, this document was initially deferred (from > this telechat). After further discussion between the AD+I2NSF chairs, this > document is being sent back to the WG to determine how to best resolve the > dependency on the capabilities information model (i.e., > draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability). > > > > (summary feedback in the datatracker) > > (discussed/announced on I2NSF list: > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/i2nsf/4D8JZgqgMNQkWGdUfsSTy7tnUik/) > > > > From a document progression perspective, all of the reviews that occur > from WGLC on must be repeated. > > > > Regards, > > Roman > > > > > > *From:* iesg <[email protected]> *On Behalf Of * Mr. Jaehoon Paul > Jeong > *Sent:* Monday, March 8, 2021 10:03 AM > *To:* The IESG <[email protected]> > *Cc:* [email protected]; skku-iotlab-members < > [email protected]>; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < > [email protected]>; Susan Hares <[email protected]> > *Subject:* Re: [I2nsf] I-D Action: > draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16.txt > > > > Hi IESG, > > I have addressed all the comments from the IESG for the I2NSF Capability > YANG Data Model Draft: > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 > > > > I attach the revision letters that were sent to the commenters. > > > > Could you move this draft forward? > > > > Thanks. > > > > Best Regards, > > Paul > > > > > > On Mon, Mar 8, 2021 at 11:12 PM <[email protected]> wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions > WG of the IETF. > > Title : I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model > Authors : Susan Hares > Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong > Jinyong (Tim) Kim > Robert Moskowitz > Qiushi Lin > Filename : draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16.txt > Pages : 78 > Date : 2021-03-08 > > Abstract: > This document defines an information model and the corresponding YANG > data model for the capabilities of various Network Security Functions > (NSFs) in the Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) > framework to centrally manage the capabilities of the various NSFs. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf > >
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