Hi Tim, I have reflected your suggested text below on the revised draft. Thanks for your help.
Best Regards, Paul On Thu, Jan 13, 2022 at 3:17 AM Tim Bray <[email protected]> wrote: > Thank you so much for addressing this! May I suggest a couple of slight > edits to the proposed text, just for clarity and slightly more idiomatic > English? > > <<<<<<<<<<<< > This section shows XML examples of I2NSF NSF Monitoring data > delivered via Monitoring Interface from an NSF. In order for the XML data > to be used correctly, the prefix (i.e., the characters before the colon) > in the > content of the element that uses the "identityref" type > (e.g., /i2nsf-event/i2nsf-system-detection-alarm/alarm-category/) in > the YANG module described in this document MUST be the same as the > namespace prefix for urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf- > monitoring. Therefore, XML software MUST be chosen that makes the > namespace prefix information available. > <<<<<<<<<<<<<< > > I hope that in future we can arrange for YANG namespace registrations to > include this note? > > On Wed, Jan 12, 2022 at 10:07 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < > [email protected]> wrote: > >> Hi Tim, >> We authors have addressed your comments in the beginning of Section 11. >> The update is as follows: >> ------------------ >> - OLD: >> >> 11. XML Examples for I2NSF NSF Monitoring >> >> This section shows the XML examples of I2NSF NSF Monitoring data >> delivered via Monitoring Interface from an NSF. >> >> - NEW: >> >> 11. XML Examples for I2NSF NSF Monitoring >> >> This section shows the XML examples of I2NSF NSF Monitoring data >> delivered via Monitoring Interface from an NSF. In order for the XML >> to work, the prefix in the element that uses "identityref" type >> (e.g., /i2nsf-event/i2nsf-system-detection-alarm/alarm-category/) in >> the YANG module described in this document MUST be the same as the >> namespace prefix for urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf- >> monitoring. The XML software MUST be chosen that makes the namespace >> prefix information available. >> ------------------ >> >> Is this update fine to you? >> >> Thanks. >> >> Best Regards, >> Paul >> >> On Fri, Dec 17, 2021 at 12:03 PM Tim Bray <[email protected]> wrote: >> >>> Sorry, but this has the same problem in figure 11.1 that we've just been >>> discussing with Ian. >>> >>> For it to work, (a) the prefix in the alarm-category element MUST be the >>> same as the namespace prefix for >>> urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring, which means that XML >>> software MUST be chosen that makes the namespace prefix information >>> available. I don't think it's OK for the draft not to say those thigns. >>> >>> <alarm-category >>> xmlns:nsfmi="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:\ >>> ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring"> >>> nsfmi:memory-alarm >>> </alarm-category> >>> >>> >>> On Thu, Dec 16, 2021 at 4:25 PM Amanda Baber via RT < >>> [email protected]> wrote: >>> >>>> Hi Tim and Martin (cc: i2nsf WG), >>>> >>>> Have you had a chance to review the XML registration in this document? >>>> >>>> >>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model/ >>>> >>>> thanks, >>>> Amanda >>>> >>>> On Tue Nov 30 21:38:22 2021, michelle.cotton wrote: >>>> > Dear Tim and Martin, >>>> > (cc to i2nsf WG) >>>> > >>>> > As the designated experts for the ns IETF xml registry, can you review >>>> > the proposed registration in draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data- >>>> > model-12 for us? Please see >>>> > >>>> > >>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data- >>>> > model/ >>>> > >>>> > If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, >>>> > we'll make the registration at >>>> > >>>> > https://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry >>>> > >>>> > The IESG has asked us to set a two-week deadline for registration >>>> > reviews. The due date for this request is 14 December 2021. >>>> > >>>> > Thank you, >>>> > >>>> > Michelle Cotton >>>> > IANA Services >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>> I2nsf mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >>> >>
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