Excellent, thank you. You can put me down as withdrawing any objections to this draft.
I would hope that in future YANG registrations we would see similar text? On Tue, Jan 18, 2022 at 3:51 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < [email protected]> wrote: > Hi Tim, > I have reflected your suggested text below on the revised draft. > > Thanks for your help. > > Best Regards, > Paul > > > On Thu, Jan 13, 2022 at 3:17 AM Tim Bray <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Thank you so much for addressing this! May I suggest a couple of slight >> edits to the proposed text, just for clarity and slightly more idiomatic >> English? >> >> <<<<<<<<<<<< >> This section shows XML examples of I2NSF NSF Monitoring data >> delivered via Monitoring Interface from an NSF. In order for the XML >> data >> to be used correctly, the prefix (i.e., the characters before the colon) >> in the >> content of the element that uses the "identityref" type >> (e.g., /i2nsf-event/i2nsf-system-detection-alarm/alarm-category/) in >> the YANG module described in this document MUST be the same as the >> namespace prefix for urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf- >> monitoring. Therefore, XML software MUST be chosen that makes the >> namespace prefix information available. >> <<<<<<<<<<<<<< >> >> I hope that in future we can arrange for YANG namespace registrations to >> include this note? >> >> On Wed, Jan 12, 2022 at 10:07 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < >> [email protected]> wrote: >> >>> Hi Tim, >>> We authors have addressed your comments in the beginning of Section 11. >>> The update is as follows: >>> ------------------ >>> - OLD: >>> >>> 11. XML Examples for I2NSF NSF Monitoring >>> >>> This section shows the XML examples of I2NSF NSF Monitoring data >>> delivered via Monitoring Interface from an NSF. >>> >>> - NEW: >>> >>> 11. XML Examples for I2NSF NSF Monitoring >>> >>> This section shows the XML examples of I2NSF NSF Monitoring data >>> delivered via Monitoring Interface from an NSF. In order for the XML >>> to work, the prefix in the element that uses "identityref" type >>> (e.g., /i2nsf-event/i2nsf-system-detection-alarm/alarm-category/) in >>> the YANG module described in this document MUST be the same as the >>> namespace prefix for urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf- >>> monitoring. The XML software MUST be chosen that makes the namespace >>> prefix information available. >>> ------------------ >>> >>> Is this update fine to you? >>> >>> Thanks. >>> >>> Best Regards, >>> Paul >>> >>> On Fri, Dec 17, 2021 at 12:03 PM Tim Bray <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>>> Sorry, but this has the same problem in figure 11.1 that we've just >>>> been discussing with Ian. >>>> >>>> For it to work, (a) the prefix in the alarm-category element MUST be >>>> the same as the namespace prefix for >>>> urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring, which means that XML >>>> software MUST be chosen that makes the namespace prefix information >>>> available. I don't think it's OK for the draft not to say those thigns. >>>> >>>> <alarm-category >>>> xmlns:nsfmi="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:\ >>>> ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring"> >>>> nsfmi:memory-alarm >>>> </alarm-category> >>>> >>>> >>>> On Thu, Dec 16, 2021 at 4:25 PM Amanda Baber via RT < >>>> [email protected]> wrote: >>>> >>>>> Hi Tim and Martin (cc: i2nsf WG), >>>>> >>>>> Have you had a chance to review the XML registration in this document? >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model/ >>>>> >>>>> thanks, >>>>> Amanda >>>>> >>>>> On Tue Nov 30 21:38:22 2021, michelle.cotton wrote: >>>>> > Dear Tim and Martin, >>>>> > (cc to i2nsf WG) >>>>> > >>>>> > As the designated experts for the ns IETF xml registry, can you >>>>> review >>>>> > the proposed registration in draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data- >>>>> > model-12 for us? Please see >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data- >>>>> > model/ >>>>> > >>>>> > If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, >>>>> > we'll make the registration at >>>>> > >>>>> > https://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry >>>>> > >>>>> > The IESG has asked us to set a two-week deadline for registration >>>>> > reviews. The due date for this request is 14 December 2021. >>>>> > >>>>> > Thank you, >>>>> > >>>>> > Michelle Cotton >>>>> > IANA Services >>>>> >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> I2nsf mailing list >>>> [email protected] >>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >>>> >>>
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