Hi Abdussalam, Thanks for contributing.
> > A routing system is all or part of a routing network. A part of a routing > > network may be a single router or a collection of routers. The routing > > system may be further divided to be an interface over which data >> traffic is forwarded, or a collection of such interfaces. > > AB>Suggest Amend> A routing system SHOULD be in all or part of the > routing network. Not sure what you mean. The use of upper case here would have no meaning. How is "should be in" more useful that "is"? > AB> Amend to> The routing system may be further divided by an > interface over which data traffic can be forwarded, or by a collection > of such interfaces. You have s/to be/by/ Doesn't "by" imply that it is the interface that does the dividing? I don't think that language works. > > I2RS facilitates real-time or event driven interaction with the routing > > system through a collection of control or management interfaces. > > These allow information, policies, and operational parameters to be > > injected into and retrieved (as read or notification) from the routing > > system while retaining data consistency and coherency across the > > routers and routing infrastructure, and between multiple interactions > > with the routing system. > > AB> replace: between with among Fine. > > 2. Include Control Plane Protocols > > This got immediate support and leads to: > > I think If included we need to define the interface within this plane, > separating I2RS protocol and the control operation protocol. > > > == > > A routing system is all or part of a routing network. A part of a routing > > network may be a single router or a collection of routers. The routing > > system may be further divided to be an interface over which data > > traffic is forwarded, or a collection of such interfaces. The routing > > system also includes the control plane protocols that operate the > > routers. > > AB> Amend> The routing system also includes the operational protocols > that are within control plane that operate the routers. I think an "operational protocol that is within the control plane" is a "control plane protocol." Thanks, Adrian _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
