Y'all -- Some comments from my weekend fun time reading... Not really, but, you know. These are all nits, but still might improve readability.
:-) Russ == various I2RS Client, but additional mechanisms might eventually be required so I2RS Client can Client/Clients This seems to be common throughout (?). == channel does not fulfill enough security requirements. For example, the it should be able to reject "it" can be removed. == However, such mechanism may mechanism/mechanisms == all Applications: In the case the I2RS Agent has a single I2RS Client. Such architecture results in I2RS Client the/this, I think. == granted -- the default rule-- should be denied. Spacing around the --'s == the various transaction they perform, transaction/transactions == over the I2RS plane - like all the I2RS Double dash, I think, to indicate an em? == Application SHOULD be provided means and methods... This doesn't seem to be worded right -- perhaps inject a "the" after "be?" == 6.2.1. DoS DoS should be "Denial of Service" here. _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
