Y'all -- More comments, this time on draft-ietf-i2rs-traceability-06. These are minor, but they're related to operation rather than straight nits.
:-) Russ == If the operation timed out, then this field will contain an all-zeroes value of "0000-00-00T00:00:00.00". Given that many I2RS operations can occur in rapid succession, the use of It just seems like it would be wiser here to add a bit someplace to indicate a timeout rather than using a magic number... == Therefore, syslog MAY be employed as a means of retrieving or disseminating the I2RS trace log contents. I don't see how the "there" relates to the "fore" here... I think the simplest thing to do is to take the "Therefore" out of this sentence, as the paragraph before and the sentence itself both will stand fine on their own (?). _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
