Sue, there are places to fill in concrete text. There is even some advice how to do this.
/js On Thu, Jan 05, 2017 at 07:32:48AM -0500, Susan Hares wrote: > Juergen: > > Where does this security solution cover the privacy issues or the ephemeral > state concepts I2RS protocol security suggests? I think this solution is a > good start, but if we are using this solution in this context I think this > needs to be upgraded. How do go about expanding this section to include > these issues? > > Which WG or set of people do we discuss this with? > > Sue > > -----Original Message----- > From: Juergen Schoenwaelder [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Thursday, January 5, 2017 4:24 AM > To: Susan Hares > Cc: 'Ben Campbell'; 'The IESG'; [email protected]; > [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: [i2rs] Ben Campbell's No Objection on > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-10: (with COMMENT) > > I think we need security solution text not security requirements text. > Anyway, for YANG modules, there is a security considerations template (RFC > 6087 section 6 and kept updated at [1]) that I think applies here as well. > > [1] https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines > > /js > > On Wed, Jan 04, 2017 at 07:27:20PM -0500, Susan Hares wrote: > > Ben: > > > > I have responded to Kathleen's comment with a lengthy set of questions. > Would you engage in the conversation on that thread? > > > > Summary of the issue: These modules and any module that refers to these > must utilize the privacy and security concerns in the > draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements-17.txt. I see the authors > referred to the ephemeral state, but left out a reference to > draft-ietf-i2rs-protocol-security-requirements. I would suggest that the > authors add this reference at the very least. > > > > Sue > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Ben Campbell [mailto:[email protected]] > > Sent: Wednesday, January 4, 2017 5:19 PM > > To: The IESG > > Cc: [email protected]; Susan Hares; > > [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > > Subject: Ben Campbell's No Objection on > > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-10: (with COMMENT) > > > > Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for > > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-10: No Objection > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut > > this introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > > > Please refer to > > https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo/ > > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > COMMENT: > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > I agree with both of Kathleen's DISCUSS points. > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > i2rs mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs > > -- > Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH > Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany > Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <http://www.jacobs-university.de/> > > _______________________________________________ > i2rs mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs -- Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany Fax: +49 421 200 3103 <http://www.jacobs-university.de/> _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
