Alex:
Welcome to Singapore. Wow! Today’s going to be a long day for you. Perhaps we should talk after you take a short nap. #1 definition - Section 3 still defines datastore uniquely, although you do point to the revised datastores. It would be best to make the same reference in section 3. #2 No examples – Please confirm by asking Kent Watsen on list regarding the examples. Otherwise, we’ll cycle on this when we get to the IESG. Also – please see the comments that were unresolved from Lada’s review of the L3 topology. Sue Hares From: Alexander Clemm [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Saturday, November 11, 2017 8:40 PM To: [email protected]; Susan Hares Cc: 'Kent Watsen'; [email protected]; [email protected]; 'Alia Atlas' Subject: Re: [i2rs] WG LC on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo (9/27/2017 to 10/11/2017) - WG Consensus declared by Chairs Hi Sue, I just arrived in Singapore. I did adopt the definition. This is addressed in -17. I did not put the example per earlier email exchange and at the time Kent seemed to be fine with that? Thanks, Alex Get Outlook for Android <https://aka.ms/ghei36> On Sun, Nov 12, 2017 at 9:13 AM +0800, "Susan Hares" <[email protected]> wrote: Alex: I had hoped to celebrate IETF-100 with submitting draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-17 to the IESG. However, there are still a few things to resolve from Kent Watens review (https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/i2rs/current/msg04501.html). In reviewing draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-17, I found the following things addressed: 1) "ietf-network" uses prefix “nd”, should be “nw” and "ietf-network-topology" uses prefix “lnk” should be “nt” or maybe “nwtp”. 2) the groupings "link-ref" and "tp-ref" descriptions should indicate why they are defined but not used in these modules 3) Both /nd:networks/network/network-id and /nd:networks/network/link/link-id are the key fields to their respective lists, but they are not the first nodes listed in the list. In reviewing draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-17, I do not find the following things address that Ken commented on: 1) Kent’s comment: Use cases exist in appendix A, but yang examples do not exist. Fix: Short examples could be put in Appendix A with each use case) 2) Kent’s comment: The document defines its own "datastore" term, rather than import the term from revised-datastores. Question: Section 3 still gives its own datastore definition. Is there a reason I missed on this approach? Could you wrap up these two issues today and submit a -18 to the IETF drafts? I’d love to chat today about these two issues. Susan Hares (shepherd/co-chair) She
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