Ben: Could you unpack the "share concern" on definition of fabric comment a bit?
Sue -----Original Message----- From: Ben Campbell [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Tuesday, April 3, 2018 10:26 PM To: The IESG Cc: [email protected]; Susan Hares; [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with COMMENT) Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I share Ignas's concern about the definition of "fabric". Otherwise, I have a couple of nits: Abstract: Missing article before "Data Center Network". ยง2: Please use the boilerplate from RFC 8174 rather than rolling your own text to constrain the keywords to their all-caps forms. _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
