On Wed, Sep 15, 2010 at 3:46 PM, Dave CROCKER <[email protected]> wrote:
> John, et al,
>
>      *****
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>      Does anyone else have comments on the draft???
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>      *****
>

I just reviewed the diffs:

Section 3.9:

INFORMATIVE DISCUSSION: This document does not require the value        
of the SDID or AUID to match the identifier in any other message        
header field.

should "the identifier" be "an identifier"?

I cringed at SDID and AUID, but I don't have any better suggestions at
the moment.

Reviewing the flow of the document, I suggest moving section 2.7-2.11
to be after section 2.2.


-- 
Jeff Macdonald
Ayer, MA
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