Jeff,

Thanks...

On 9/22/2010 12:18 PM, Jeff Macdonald wrote:
> Section 3.9:
>
> INFORMATIVE DISCUSSION: This document does not require the value      
> of the SDID or AUID to match the identifier in any other message      
> header field.
>
> should "the identifier" be "an identifier"?

pretty subtle, but yeah, more precise/accurate.


> I cringed at SDID and AUID, but I don't have any better suggestions at
> the moment.
>
> Reviewing the flow of the document, I suggest moving section 2.7-2.11
> to be after section 2.2.

well, that's a pretty thoughtful suggestion...

To make sure I understand the intent:  move the set of subsections that 
introduce higher-level constructs, to come before the sub-sections that define 
syntactic elements?

Sounds like an improvement to me.

d/

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   Dave Crocker
   Brandenburg InternetWorking
   bbiw.net
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