Nice job.  One comment:

On Thu, Jun 21, 2012 at 6:10 PM, IETF Chair <[email protected]> allegedly
wrote:

>   If you write, say, or discuss anything in the IETF, formally or
> informally,
>

Can you fit "even between meetings" at the end of this line?  Some people
will think "in the IETF" refers to physical meetings, and may not get
through the detailed info that comes later.


>   (all of which we call "a contribution") that you know is covered by a
> patent
>   or patent application you or your employer own, one of you must disclose
>   that.


I also like know -> believe.

Thanks ... Scott

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