I agree .. Peter's version is clear and concise. On Thu, 21 Jun 2012, Sam Hartman wrote:
> I like Peter's rephrasing for a number of reasons. > > 1) Clearly states who is responsible for making the disclosure happen > (the IETf contributor) > > 2) Defines IETf contribution in its own sentence which makes it easier > to reference later. > > 3) Makes it clear that things like mailing list conversations are > covered. >
