Hi Gayle, On Tue, Dec 11, 2012 at 7:43 PM, gayle noble <[email protected]> wrote: > Very well written!! No spelling errors! No grammatical errors! Only one > sentence, in my opinion, could be rephrased for clarity > 4.1. Data Plane > RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames destined for them or > which require processing by the OAM plane from normal data frames. > [Might be clearer if it was [RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM > frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or > require processing by the OAM plane.]]
Thanks for the praise! I think that your suggested wording could be improved by replacing the word "identify" with the word "distinguish". Donald ============================= Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA [email protected] > gayle
