I totally agree with that tweak >*sparkles*<
[RBridges MUST have the ability to distinguish OAM frames from normal
data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or require
processing by the OAM plane.]
Perfect >*bow*<
gayle
At 07:54 AM 12/19/2012, Donald Eastlake wrote:
Hi Gayle,
On Tue, Dec 11, 2012 at 7:43 PM, gayle noble <wind...@skyhighway.com> wrote:
> Very well written!! No spelling errors! No grammatical errors! Only one
> sentence, in my opinion, could be rephrased for clarity
> 4.1. Data Plane
> RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames destined for them or
> which require processing by the OAM plane from normal data frames.
> [Might be clearer if it was [RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM
> frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or
> require processing by the OAM plane.]]
Thanks for the praise!
I think that your suggested wording could be improved by replacing the
word "identify" with the word "distinguish".
Donald
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