Michelle Olson wrote: > Hi all, > > I'm working on install doc content for the OpenSolaris starter kit, > the focus is on multiboot install for x86 laptop, based on the recent > FROSUG preso by Dave Hagerty and Ginnie Wray. The content has been > through one initial technical review, so I'm ready for full-blown > expert commentary ;-) See the following page for links to the > content: > http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews/ >
First, the link to provide feedback for the starter kit documentation is incorrect, it points the "Intro to Operating Systems..." feedback thread. So my feedback is coming this way instead. Second, given the short deadline for review, I only had time to skim this very quickly. Two things that I noticed: - The page on repartitioning didn't make any recommendation of how much space to make available for OpenSolaris. - The Configuring Xorg for nVidia page has a subhead of "Configuring Wireless Networking..." which is clearly incorrect. The navigation feels odd - Next/Prev within sections, but then I have to go off to some TOC to get to the next section. There are likely other things that I might have found, but that's all the time I have before today's deadline. If you have another round with a slightly longer timeframe in which to schedule review, I'd be happy to comment further. Dave
