Hi Dave, you wrote: > >First, the link to provide feedback for the starter kit documentation is >incorrect, it points the "Intro to Operating Systems..." feedback >thread. So my feedback is coming this way instead.
Drat! I've fixed that now. Thanks for responding on this list instead. > >Second, given the short deadline for review, I only had time to skim >this very quickly. Two things that I noticed: > >- The page on repartitioning didn't make any recommendation of how much >space to make available for OpenSolaris. I appreciate this comment, it was made by another reviewer also, so this will be fixed with a recommendation. The other reviewer also suggested a discussion or pointer to information about layouts and partition numbering. > >- The Configuring Xorg for nVidia page has a subhead of "Configuring >Wireless Networking..." which is clearly incorrect. Thanks, fixed. > >The navigation feels odd - Next/Prev within sections, but then I have to >go off to some TOC to get to the next section. Right, the formatting is for a standalone HTML wrapper that is weird in the opensolaris.org setup. Sorry about that, I traded pretty for time. > >There are likely other things that I might have found, but that's all >the time I have before today's deadline. If you have another round with >a slightly longer timeframe in which to schedule review, I'd be happy to >comment further. I really appreciate your help with this. I will post updated files and send another message tonight. Regards, Michelle This message posted from opensolaris.org
