Hi Ron,

1)      and 2 ) are fine. IMO: 3) works under certain conditions but not all.


I add David Black (TSVWG chair) to the thread. He can provide the thorough 
check.

Regards,
Lucy

From: Ronald Bonica [mailto:rbon...@juniper.net]
Sent: Monday, March 30, 2015 4:49 PM
To: Lucy yong; Zuniga, Juan Carlos; int-area@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org
Cc: draft-ietf-intarea-gre-i...@tools.ietf.org; intarea-cha...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6

Lucy,

Would the following text work?

OLD>
   Because the IPv6 delivery header does not include a checksum of its
   own, it is subject to corruption.  However, even if the delivery
   header is corrupted, to likelihood of that corruption resulting in
   misdelivery of the payload is extremely low.
<OLD

NEW>
   Because the IPv6 delivery header does not include a checksum of its
   own,  the destination address in the delivery header is subject to
   corruption. If the destination address in the deliver header is corrupted,
   the following outcomes are possible:


1)      The delivery packet is dropped because the new destination address is 
unreachable

2)      The delivery packet is dropped because the new destination address is 
reachable, but that node is not configured to process GRE delivery packets from 
the ingress

3)      The delivery packet is processed by a GRE egress other than that which 
was originally specified by the GRE ingress. Processing options are:

a.       The payload packet is dropped because the payload destination is 
unreachable from the node that processed the delivery packet

b.      The payload packet is delivered to its intended destination because the 
payload destination is reachable from the node that processed the delivery 
packet

All of these outcomes are acceptable.

<NEW

                          Ron

From: Lucy yong [mailto:lucy.y...@huawei.com]
Sent: Monday, March 30, 2015 4:50 PM
To: Zuniga, Juan Carlos; int-area@ietf.org<mailto:int-area@ietf.org>; 
i...@ietf.org<mailto:i...@ietf.org>
Cc: 
draft-ietf-intarea-gre-i...@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-intarea-gre-i...@tools.ietf.org>;
 intarea-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:intarea-cha...@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6

Thanks authors to add section 4.1.

I am not sure if the statement of “However, even if the delivery header is 
corrupted, to likelihood of that corruption resulting in misdelivery of the 
payload is extremely low.” is proper. IPv6 requires the end point/upper layer 
to deal with the header corruption. Could we state that this is the difference 
from gre-in-ipv4 instead?

Lucy


From: Int-area [mailto:int-area-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Zuniga, Juan 
Carlos
Sent: Monday, March 30, 2015 3:27 PM
To: int-area@ietf.org<mailto:int-area@ietf.org>; 
i...@ietf.org<mailto:i...@ietf.org>
Cc: 
draft-ietf-intarea-gre-i...@tools.ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-intarea-gre-i...@tools.ietf.org>;
 intarea-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:intarea-cha...@ietf.org>
Subject: [Int-area] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6


Dear Int-Area and 6man WGs,



At the Int-Area WG meeting in Dallas there were some comments on 
draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6. It was decided to submit the document for WG Last 
Call to the Int-Area & 6man WGs as soon as the agreed changes were made.



The document has now been updated accordingly, so this email starts an 
Int-Area/6man WGs Last Call on:



http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6-04



Please respond to this email to support the document and/or send comments by 
2015-04-06.



In addition, to satisfy RFC 6702 "Promoting Compliance with Intellectual 
Property Rights (IPR)":

Are you personally aware of any IPR that applies to draft-ietf-intarea-gre-ipv6?

If so, has this IPR been disclosed in compliance with IETF IPR rules?

(See RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669, and 5378 for more details.)



Best,



Juan Carlos Zuniga
(as Int-Area WG co-chair)

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