Ron,

A few comments on your draft.

Naming the draft "Lossless Path MTU Discovery (PMTUD)” seems to be very 
aspirational, and is an oxymoron.  ICMP message can be rate limited and dropped 
in the network.   Hardly “lossless”.  A different title might be better.

I do like the idea of the destination sending feedback, we have worked on some 
other drafts with that property.

The document says:

   This document describes alternative PMTUD procedures that do no rely
   on the network's ability to deliver ICMP Destination Unreachable
   messages to the source node.  In these procedures, the source node
   produces an initial PMTU estimate.  This initial estimate is equal to
   the MTU of the first link along the path to the destination node.  It
   can be greater than the actual PMTU.

This is not really correct, your are still dependent on the networks ability to 
deliver ICMP messages to the source node.  Just not ICMP Destination 
Unreachable messages.   A new ICMP message isn’t going to be better, perhaps 
worse.

I didn’t understand the purpose of the Code field, that can indicate reassembly 
error.  What is the purpose of this?   This seems to be in conflict with this 
message that is sent when the destination node successfully reassemblies a set 
of fragments.  With the code indicating reassembly error, it is saying that the 
fragments were not reassembled.

It may be folly to try to modify IPv4 implementations at this point.   I have 
no objections if you wish to try pushing this big rock up hill, but I doubt you 
will be successful.

I see you have several co-authors from Harvey Mudd College.

Bob


> On Oct 31, 2019, at 12:16 PM, Ron Bonica 
> <rbonica=40juniper....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
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> Updated draft
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> Name:         draft-bonica-intarea-lossless-pmtud
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> Title:                Lossless Path MTU Discovery (PMTUD)
> Document date:        2019-10-31
> Group:                Individual Submission
> Pages:                7
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> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-bonica-intarea-lossless-pmtud-01
> Abstract:
>   This document describes alternative IPv4 PMTUD procedures that do not
>   prevent IP fragmentation and do no rely on the network's ability to
>   deliver ICMP Destination Unreachable messages to the source node.
>   This document also defines a new ICMP message.  IPv4 nodes emit this
>   new message when they reassemble a fragmented packet.
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