From: Erik Nordmark <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Subject: Comments on prefix delegation requirements
Date: Tue, 19 Nov 2002 02:46:24 +0100 (CET)

> 
> I think these are just editorial nits.
> 
> The draft talks about "commercial" but I think the same issues are present
> if there is a non-commercial ISP that wants to offer non-commercial IPv6
> service. So in terms of describing the need for the technology it is probably
> best to drop the "commercial" designation.
> 
> Similarely, the statement about "boost IPv6 business quick as possible."
> might also distract from the technical content of the document.
> 
> The document talks about "RA (Router Avertisement)". It would be good to
> add a reference to the proxy RA document (as "work in progress")
> to make the reference explicit.
> 
> I see some spelling errors like "signle.

thanks! I will take those comments to update.

Shin


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