Valery Smyslov writes:
> 4. Page 11.
> "At this point in the negotiation, each party can generate SKEYSEED,
> from which all keys are derived for that IKE SA."
>
> Term SKEYSEED pops up from nowhere. No reference is gived and
> even no word is explained what is it all about. First-time readers will
> definitely be puzzled. I suggest to change:
>
> "At this point in the negotiation, each party can generate a quantity
> called SKEYSEED (see section 2.14), from which all keys are derived
> for that IKE SA."
Changed:
<t>At this point in the negotiation, each party can generate
SKEYSEED, from which all keys are derived for that IKE SA.
To:
<t>At this point in the negotiation, each party can generate a
quantity called SKEYSEED (see <xref target="sect-2.14"/>),
from which all keys are derived for that IKE SA.
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