Hi Tero,

I think the current text (with reduced "that") is grammatically correct and
its meaning is clear. However, if you think that addind "that" would
improve text clarity, I (and hopely Paul) have no objections to that.

Regards,
Valery.

In the -05 version the last paragraph of the section 3 was changed,
but I think it is missing some words:

  unauthenticated IKE peers.  Implementations might have made
  assumptions remote peers are identified.  With NULL Authentication

I think it should be "Implementations might have made assumptions that
remote peers are identified", or similar.
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