Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-11: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- This is easier than usual to read for this sort of draft :-) -- Section 1, 1st paragraph: I concur with Stephen's comment. Furthermore, this entire paragraph pretty much reads like advertising copy. Can it be toned down a bit? -- 8.1 (Normative References) The reference to [RFC7539] is a normative downref. I don't see it on the downref registry, nor was it mentioned in the last call notice. (For the record, I think it's a reasonable downref.) _______________________________________________ IPsec mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipsec
