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ASF GitHub Bot commented on CB-10331:
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Github user dblotsky commented on a diff in the pull request:
https://github.com/apache/cordova-docs/pull/465#discussion_r50928062
--- Diff: www/docs/en/dev/guide/overview/index.md ---
@@ -27,9 +27,7 @@ to use standard web technologies such as HTML5, CSS3, and
JavaScript
for cross-platform development, avoiding each mobile platforms' native
development language. Applications execute within wrappers targeted
to each platform, and rely on standards-compliant API bindings to
-access each device's sensors, data, and network status.
-
-Apache Cordova graduated in October 2012 as a top level project within the
Apache Software Foundation (ASF). Through the ASF, future Cordova development
will ensure open stewardship of the project. It will always remain free and
open source under the Apache License, Version 2.0. Visit
[cordova.apache.org](http://cordova.apache.org) for more information.
+access each device's capabilities such as sensors, data, network status,
etc.
--- End diff --
"such as" -> "like", or "capabilities such as" -> "capabilities, such as"
> Improve Overview Page
> ----------------------
>
> Key: CB-10331
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CB-10331
> Project: Apache Cordova
> Issue Type: Task
> Components: Docs
> Reporter: Raghav
> Assignee: Sarangan Rajamanickam
> Labels: Docs-6.x
>
> URL: http://cordova.apache.org/docs/en/latest/guide/overview/
> The idea is to make it compact and remove unnecessary information.
> Remove history section. We can give the link to Wiki instead.
> Remove visit Cordova link.
> General guidelines:
> - While giving examples, keep them short. Do not repeat for all
> plugins/platforms.
> - Remove all references to cordova plugin registry.
> - Remove Tizen references. The platform is deprecated
> (http://markmail.org/message/hryg6sjswecpgndu)
> - Keep information up to date for the platforms, CLI and plugins
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