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ASF GitHub Bot commented on CB-10331:
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Github user dblotsky commented on the pull request:
https://github.com/apache/cordova-docs/pull/465#issuecomment-175325394
1. In general, should we be using first-person or third-person voice in the
docs? I realised halfway through the review that some pages use both, and it
would be better if we stick to one of the two.
2. Do you think some of the paragraphs on this page can be shortened or
maybe even removed entirely? What information should this page contain, and is
it currently containing more than that?
> Improve Overview Page
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> Key: CB-10331
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CB-10331
> Project: Apache Cordova
> Issue Type: Task
> Components: Docs
> Reporter: Raghav
> Assignee: Sarangan Rajamanickam
> Labels: Docs-6.x
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> URL: http://cordova.apache.org/docs/en/latest/guide/overview/
> The idea is to make it compact and remove unnecessary information.
> Remove history section. We can give the link to Wiki instead.
> Remove visit Cordova link.
> General guidelines:
> - While giving examples, keep them short. Do not repeat for all
> plugins/platforms.
> - Remove all references to cordova plugin registry.
> - Remove Tizen references. The platform is deprecated
> (http://markmail.org/message/hryg6sjswecpgndu)
> - Keep information up to date for the platforms, CLI and plugins
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