Pil0tXia commented on code in PR #4709:
URL: https://github.com/apache/eventmesh/pull/4709#discussion_r1450509733


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README.md:
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@@ -49,31 +50,133 @@ Apache EventMesh has a vast amount of features to help 
users achieve their goals
 - Easy Function develop and framework integration.
 
 ## Roadmap
+
 Please go to the [roadmap](https://eventmesh.apache.org/docs/roadmap) to get 
the release history and new features of Apache EventMesh.
 
 ## Subprojects
+
 - [EventMesh-site](https://github.com/apache/eventmesh-site): Apache official 
website resources for EventMesh.
 - [EventMesh-workflow](https://github.com/apache/eventmesh-workflow): 
Serverless workflow runtime for event Orchestration on EventMesh.
 - [EventMesh-dashboard](https://github.com/apache/eventmesh-dashboard): 
Operation and maintenance console of EventMesh.
 - [EventMesh-catalog](https://github.com/apache/eventmesh-catalog): Catalog 
service for event schema management using AsyncAPI.
 - [EventMesh-go](https://github.com/apache/eventmesh-go): A go implementation 
for EventMesh runtime.
 
 ## Quick start
-Here are the guidelines:
 
-[Step 1: Deploy 
eventmesh-store](https://eventmesh.apache.org/docs/instruction/store)
+This section of the guide will show you the steps to deploy EventMesh from 
[Local](#run-eventmesh-runtime-locally), 
[Docker](#run-eventmesh-runtime-in-docker), 
[K8s](#run-eventmesh-runtime-in-kubernetes).  
+
+This section guide is just to help you quickly get started with EventMesh 
deployment, start EventMesh according to the default configuration, if you need 
more detailed EventMesh deployment steps, please visit the [EventMesh official 
document](https://eventmesh.apache.org/docs/next/introduction).

Review Comment:
   Basically, it's okay. It would be better to remove `/next` from this URL 
because the Next version displays a banner:
   
   
![image](https://github.com/apache/eventmesh/assets/41445332/164a2b2c-da00-4794-bbba-9eed913c3c0f)
   
   Besides, is this sentence not completely deleted? `is just to help you 
quickly get started with EventMesh deployment`



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