shaofengshi commented on a change in pull request #348: added release notes, 
modified kylin and coprocessor upgrade guides
URL: https://github.com/apache/kylin/pull/348#discussion_r238899445
 
 

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 > Extreme OLAP Engine for Big Data
 
-Apache Kylin™是一个开源的分布式分析引擎,提供Hadoop之上的SQL查询接口及多维分析(OLAP)能力以支持超大规模数据,最初由eBay 
Inc.开发并贡献至开源社区。
+Apache Kylin™ 是一个开源 OLAP(On-Line Analytics 
Processing)分析引擎,针对数据库与亿万级记录提供亚秒级查询响应能力。2014 年由 eBay Inc.开发并贡献至开源社区。2015 年毕业于 
Apache 顶级项目并迅速被全球数千家公司与组织应用于数据分析业务,同时也在 2015 与 2016 年赢得 InfoWorld Bossie Awards 
年度最佳大数据开源工具。 
 
 Review comment:
   "Online" is a word, not "On-Line", please check the terms: 
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_analytical_processing

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