shaofengshi commented on a change in pull request #348: added release notes, modified kylin and coprocessor upgrade guides URL: https://github.com/apache/kylin/pull/348#discussion_r238900904
########## File path: website/_docs/howto/howto_upgrade.md ########## @@ -1,112 +1,146 @@ --- layout: docs -title: Upgrade From Old Versions +title: Upgrade Kylin From Old Versions categories: howto permalink: /docs/howto/howto_upgrade.html since: v1.5.1 --- -Running as a Hadoop client, Apache Kylin's metadata and Cube data are persistended in Hadoop (HBase and HDFS), so the upgrade is relatively easy and user does not need worry about data loss. The upgrade can be performed in the following steps: +Running as a Hadoop client, Apache Kylin's metadata and Cube data are persistent in Hadoop (HBase and HDFS), so the upgrade is relatively easy and user does not need worry about data loss. The upgrade can be performed in the following steps: Review comment: "persistent" is incorrect in this context, it is adjective, while here we need "be persisted" which is a passive voice; (a typo in the previous version). ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org With regards, Apache Git Services
