FrankYang0529 commented on code in PR #17844:
URL: https://github.com/apache/kafka/pull/17844#discussion_r1858577288


##########
docs/security.html:
##########
@@ -847,27 +847,27 @@ <h3 class="anchor-heading"><a id="security_sasl" 
class="anchor-link"></a><a href
                 Kafka supports <a 
href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7677";>SCRAM-SHA-256</a> and SCRAM-SHA-512 
which
                 can be used with TLS to perform secure authentication. Under 
the default implementation of <code>principal.builder.class</code>, the 
username is used as the authenticated
                 <code>Principal</code> for configuration of ACLs etc. The 
default SCRAM implementation in Kafka
-                stores SCRAM credentials in Zookeeper and is suitable for use 
in Kafka installations where Zookeeper
-                is on a private network. Refer to <a 
href="#security_sasl_scram_security">Security Considerations</a>
+                stores SCRAM credentials in KRaft controllers. Refer to <a 
href="#security_sasl_scram_security">Security Considerations</a>
                 for more details.</p>
             <ol>
                 <li><h5 class="anchor-heading"><a 
id="security_sasl_scram_credentials" class="anchor-link"></a><a 
href="#security_sasl_scram_credentials">Creating SCRAM Credentials</a></h5>
-                    <p>The SCRAM implementation in Kafka uses Zookeeper as 
credential store. Credentials can be created in
-                        Zookeeper using <code>kafka-configs.sh</code>. For 
each SCRAM mechanism enabled, credentials must be created
+                    <p>The SCRAM implementation in Kafka uses KRaft 
controllers as credential store. Credentials can be created in
+                        KRaft controllers using <code>kafka-storage.sh</code> 
or <code>kafka-configs.sh</code>. For each SCRAM mechanism enabled, credentials 
must be created
                         by adding a config with the mechanism name. 
Credentials for inter-broker communication must be created
-                        before Kafka brokers are started. Client credentials 
may be created and updated dynamically and updated
-                        credentials will be used to authenticate new 
connections.</p>
-                    <p>Create SCRAM credentials for user <i>alice</i> with 
password <i>alice-secret</i>:
-                    <pre><code class="language-bash">$ bin/kafka-configs.sh 
--zookeeper localhost:2182 --zk-tls-config-file zk_tls_config.properties 
--alter --add-config 
'SCRAM-SHA-256=[iterations=8192,password=alice-secret],SCRAM-SHA-512=[password=alice-secret]'
 --entity-type users --entity-name alice</code></pre>
+                        before Kafka brokers are started. 
<code>kafka-storage.sh</code> can format storage with initial credentials.
+                        Client credentials may be created and updated 
dynamically and updated credentials will be used to authenticate new 
connections.
+                        <code>kafka-configs.sh</code> can be used to create 
and update credentials after Kafka brokers are started.</p>
+                    <p>Create initial SCRAM credentials for user <i>admin</i> 
with password <i>admin-secret</i>:
+                    <pre><code class="language-bash">$ bin/kafka-storage.sh 
format -t $(bin/kafka-storage.sh random-uuid) -c config/kraft/server.properties 
--add-scram 'SCRAM-SHA-256=[name="admin",password="admin-secret"]'</code></pre>
+                    <p>Create SCRAM credentials for user <i>alice</i> with 
password <i>alice-secret</i> (refer to <a 
href="#security_sasl_scram_clientconfig">Configuring Kafka Clients</a> for 
client configuration):
+                    <pre><code class="language-bash">$ bin/kafka-configs.sh 
--bootstrap-server localhost:9092 --alter --add-config 
'SCRAM-SHA-256=[iterations=8192,password=alice-secret]' --entity-type users 
--entity-name alice --command-config client.properties</code></pre>
                     <p>The default iteration count of 4096 is used if 
iterations are not specified. A random salt is created

Review Comment:
   Yes, adding the condition to the sentence.



-- 
This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service.
To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the
URL above to go to the specific comment.

To unsubscribe, e-mail: jira-unsubscr...@kafka.apache.org

For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at:
us...@infra.apache.org

Reply via email to